This was overall a very enjoyable read that bogged down at the end. It made heavy use of YA tropes but had adults-only romance and those two components fit awkwardly together. The characters' dialogue was very modern, which took getting used to with the setting.
The first two-thirds were a real page-turner that I compulsively read until I slowed down at the end.
The equation here was (a worse version of Scholomance) + (a better version of Divergent) + (a few Game of Thrones elements) + (sex scenes).
I'll definitely read the next one, and I wonder if the school will continue to feature in the plot, or if it will go another direction.
Inhaltswarnung
spoilers ahoy! discussion of horniness/gaping plot holes/character development
Decently written fighting sequences
Worldbuilding/history of lands great, logic of how/when magic works not
Enemies-to-lovers arc is Really Central
Two extended hyper-explicit hetero sex sequences that feel out of place with the rest of the text, kind of written like fight sequences (consent is prominent, don't recall any non-con threats/assault in text), but as someone expecting a magic-school-but-dragon-riders fantasy....yow! Maybe a disclaimer that this is not YA on the cover?! Such a horny book.
Dragons and characters outside the main pairing felt cardboard.
Protagonist is too small and thus can't handle riding the dragon (who's main descriptors are 'big and black') is cringe.
Of course the handsome male lead's magic power is smoke.
Of course he's overwhelmingly hot to her, but he shoves down all his trauma, so its just hot trauma.
Of course her power is lightning and its outside her control and she's the powerfullest.
Like cell phones in horror flicks set after Year 2000 CE, telepathy works only when its needed to advance the plot, and we have to forget the option is available when the plot requires.
Magical creatures are horses without agency but they do have their own lore and laws which we as humans can't know.
Why are the dragons helping the humans?
What's new and innovative to the lore of dragons coming from this book?
Logistics of 'war-bonded-pair' dragons that are supposed to live 200 years tied to the lives of humans who have...at most 20 years of good military service...don't add up.
Where's the Temeraire of dragon-kind who's letting the humans battle for 400 years and watching all their dragon-bros get killed?
Breadcrumbs were more bread-loaves that telegraphed upcoming events. (that comment based on snark from my spouse, hearing me rant to her about this book).
I guess we're just going to all have to agree that the only way to solve the problems in this society is through violence and a high death rate for the navy seals program.
Meh. I'm not sure who the target audience is for this one. #FourthWing
This book is so hyped, which is probably why this review is a little bit unfair.
If you've managed to avoid the hype it goes like this: really compelling fantasy series, with tons of hot smutty sex scenes.
So first, to address the latter. There are a couple of sex scenes. As in... two. They are both in the last third of the book. The rest of the book is filled with the kind of yearning a 7th grader might write about in her diary (drooling over a crush's muscular abs, or his thick hair). They are not the stuff of adult desire. At least, not from my perspective. And that's what's missing, even from the sex scenes for me: desire. I was not exactly carried away on the wings of fantasy reading them. I saw another review that said "these sex scenes were so explicit". Were they?! I'm worried about that person's sex life now. They were explicit, and they were graphic, but they described pretty vanilla hetero sex? and I'm not super kinky, and I like smut as much as the next person, but this was not compelling smut for me.
But here's the thing! I think, were it not for the awkward attempt at smut, this would have been a half-way decent fantasy book. Clearly, it borrows a lot of plot and universe building from other IP (Harry Potter, Game of Thrones, Hunger Games). Still, it creates a mostly compelling narrative on its own (even though I guessed at every plot twist in the book since the author does some very obvious breadcrumbling). But the sex almost detracts from it: it feels completely unnecessary.
So... I will not be reading the sequels, is what I'm trying to say, unless I'm looking for something to occupy a weekend when otherwise very depressed.
Ein leeres Stück Ödnis – der Ideen, Dialoge, Reflexionen und der Nicht-Welt. Dieses Buch gehört zum Genre der Romantasy. Der Loveinterest steht klar im Vordergrund, wird allerdings erst im letzten Viertel mit sexuellen Aktivitäten bespielt. Also hier mal ganz klar: Ball flach halten Leute! Frau Maas tobt sich da deutlich euphorischer aus, ganz zu schweigen von J.R. Ward mit ihren pornösen Vampiren.
Die Autorin begeht den Fehler und setzt uns 20 jährige Figuren vor die Nase, die in unsägliches, peinliches Schulhofgequatsche verfallen, wenn es um amouröse Anwandlungen und ihre zwischenmenschlichen Beziehungen geht. Da ward die hochgelobte Intelligenz mal eben aus den Zeilen getilgt. Diese zu Reitern und Kriegern ausgebildeten Menschen sind ganz versessen darauf mächtig Verantwortung zu übernehmen, indem über gewaltige Kräfte geboten wird, sobald man sich mit seinem Drachen verbindet. Alles ist straff durchorganisiert. Ein monströses starres Regelwerk und Autorität. Man blickt dem eigenen Tod täglich ins Angesicht. Alles …
Ein leeres Stück Ödnis – der Ideen, Dialoge, Reflexionen und der Nicht-Welt. Dieses Buch gehört zum Genre der Romantasy. Der Loveinterest steht klar im Vordergrund, wird allerdings erst im letzten Viertel mit sexuellen Aktivitäten bespielt. Also hier mal ganz klar: Ball flach halten Leute! Frau Maas tobt sich da deutlich euphorischer aus, ganz zu schweigen von J.R. Ward mit ihren pornösen Vampiren.
Die Autorin begeht den Fehler und setzt uns 20 jährige Figuren vor die Nase, die in unsägliches, peinliches Schulhofgequatsche verfallen, wenn es um amouröse Anwandlungen und ihre zwischenmenschlichen Beziehungen geht. Da ward die hochgelobte Intelligenz mal eben aus den Zeilen getilgt. Diese zu Reitern und Kriegern ausgebildeten Menschen sind ganz versessen darauf mächtig Verantwortung zu übernehmen, indem über gewaltige Kräfte geboten wird, sobald man sich mit seinem Drachen verbindet. Alles ist straff durchorganisiert. Ein monströses starres Regelwerk und Autorität. Man blickt dem eigenen Tod täglich ins Angesicht. Alles zum Schutz des Landes. Kann man erahnen worauf ich hinaus möchte? Das was die Autorin sagt und behauptet, macht sie durch die Tat, das Verhalten komplett zunichte. Ich habe selten so in sich unschlüssige, unglaubwürdige Charaktere erlebt. Sie baut Logikfehler ein, nur um gewisse Situationen dramatisch aufzuladen. Die Protagonistin Vi und Icherzählerin kommentiert sich in einer Tour selber. Eine narzisstische Selbstbespiegelung ohne Gleichen. Eine Dauerschleife der Unzulänglichkeiten. Es wird geredet, geredet, gedacht, kommentiert, gedacht, geredet und geschmachtet. Ein schwaches Püppchen das zur Stärke heranreift und sich so ihren starken Mann verdient.
Nein nein, da sind ein paar ganz selbstlose dabei, mit großartigem Charakter, die noch für was einstehen, sich auflehnen und die Regeln hinterfragen. Jaa, sie sind da. Sagt die Autorin. Behauptet sie im Buch. Weiße Leinwand, Schild wird hochgehalten. Jo, muss reichen. Hier wird Nichts, gar nicht durch Szenen verdeutlicht, klar gemacht, gezeigt, entwickelt. Wir müssen die Kröte einfach schlucken dass es so ist. Das ist unfassbar armselig.
Die Welt ist nicht vorhanden. Wir bekommen lediglich das Viadukt, Räume, Flugplätze und einen Baum geboten. Mir ist noch nie ein Fantasyroman untergekommen, der seine Welt so wenig ausgestaltet wie dieses Werk. Das ist an Unterkomplexität kaum zu unterbieten. Die ersten 90% des Buches drehen sich fast ausschließlich um Gespräche, Monologe, Gedanken, Unterricht, auf Matten rumwälzen, Essen, Schlafen, sich an den Körpern der Männchen aufwuscheln, an Lippen zu hängen - der erste Kontakt mit den Drachen und das Dreschen mal ausgenommen.
Erst die letzten 10% dreht das Buch auf. Bekommt Actionszenen zum mitfiebern, lässt einen angespannt die Szenerie verfolgen, bis zum fiesen Cliffhanger.
Also, wer Bock auf Sex und Action hat, braucht nur die letzten 25% lesen. Und kann dann direkt mit Band 2 weiter machen….
Ugh. Where do I even start. Yes, the premise of the book is very promising. But the prose is so poorly written. It's as if the author just kept filling up her word count for the day. Also, there are many plot holes. I can accept flawed characters, but the MC couldn't get any more generic and cliché. I tried to give it time to see if it improves but no it just the same over and over. I really wanted this to work for me but unfortunately it didn't.
Another book that I enjoyed more than I thought I would
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Another book that I enjoyed more than I thought I would! We follow Violet SorrengaiI when she joins the Basgiath War College to become a dragonrider in the kingdom of Navarre. All she wanted was to become a scribe, but her mother, who is a war General, forces her to join the Dragonriders Quadrant, instead of the Scribe Quadrant. Just to keep family tradition (her older siblings were also dragonriders). I feel bad about the ruthlessness nature of this military school (there are zero concerns with safety and well-being of the cadets) but I got past that. Cadets die if they make mistakes or fail the crazy challenges and test assigned to them. They are prepared to bond with a dragon and become a rider. The bond is strong, rider and dragons can telepathically communicate. And if you're a rider and your dragon dies, you die! I'm loving the mental …
Another book that I enjoyed more than I thought I would! We follow Violet SorrengaiI when she joins the Basgiath War College to become a dragonrider in the kingdom of Navarre. All she wanted was to become a scribe, but her mother, who is a war General, forces her to join the Dragonriders Quadrant, instead of the Scribe Quadrant. Just to keep family tradition (her older siblings were also dragonriders). I feel bad about the ruthlessness nature of this military school (there are zero concerns with safety and well-being of the cadets) but I got past that. Cadets die if they make mistakes or fail the crazy challenges and test assigned to them. They are prepared to bond with a dragon and become a rider. The bond is strong, rider and dragons can telepathically communicate. And if you're a rider and your dragon dies, you die! I'm loving the mental banter-dialogues between the riders and the dragons. The romance is a slow burn well developed enemies-to-lovers. It's over the top and I loved it! I definitely want to check out the second book in the series.
